1st argument - how our lives and mine are affected by the digital world
-own experience
-interviews and surveys
-other blogs
-lecture
2nd argument - why this has made conformity worse
-lecture
-own experience
-other blogs
3rd argument - what would the good side or bad side of all this
- Feed
-Everything good is bad
-Music
-Wall - E
-Digtal experiments
Michele,
ReplyDeleteYour outline for your essay is pretty clean cut and ready to be turned into an essay. I see how in your first arguments, you focus on the beginning of our class' unit, which is a good way to introduce your topic. Then you plan to talk about more of YOUR personal experiences with digital technology, as well as go even further on what we learned in class this year. Overall, I like your essay plan and Thesis is practically done. All you may need is a little more detail in your thesis ( since Andy just talked about Thesis in papers right now). Other than that, good job and Good luck.
Michelle I think your off to a very good start. Your arguments and resources for it, our very clear. This should allow you to have a easier time writing the paper.I also think its very good out you want to incroporate a piece of yourself in the paper.I would only say that you need to begin to sharpen your thesis more, it needs to be a little tighter , basically to the point. But overall great job cant wait to read it.
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