I like the thesis and all your arguments back up your thesis well. Really like the part of how going to talk about the negative aspects of technology. Think paper will be interesting but 2nd and 3rd kind of sound the same they both are like the negative effects. Maybe you couldtighten your arguments a bit but this a good start. hope i get a chance to read it.
Brandon,
Like how you a have really good arguments and they do back up your thesis. The things you are talking about seem really interesting like how life is easier with digital or social part of technology. These are good topics because the reader will be interested. But the thesis should be short and simple but I think it'll be easy because you have a good start. hope to read your pape.r
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