you got a lot of great ideas and it made me see how it backed up on your thesis. Onhow helps you stay connected with loved ones but maybe could have more evidence on how it makes our lives easier or your other arguments but besides that its good start. Good Job
Matt,
You have a lot of good evidence, and like how you start off by giving readers backroung info. It really made me understand how it is harming us and could easily tell what your three arguments were. all you really need is opposing viewpoints but besides that its a great start.
You have a lot of good evidence, and like how you start off by giving readers backroung info. It really made me understand how it is harming us and could easily tell what your three arguments were. all you really need is opposing viewpoints but besides that its a great start.
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