Hw # 25 - Part 1

Brandon
I like this it showed that he was cool because he stood up for the " non - cool" and realizes who he truly wants to be for his sake not others! NICE!

Larche,
I really like the reactions those around had the "cool" kid and your style of writing was creative. Your story made understand what you viewed as cool. NICE JOB :)

Matt,

I thought your story was awesome because it was more like a script and really showed what you or the characters viewed as cool. Love reading your posts!

Amber,

I really like this, at first i thought this person was older but like how you depicted what "cool" is and showed how rebellion can be seen as cool. Love it

Sam,
your story was good and also because you did a guy instead of a girl. So it made me understand your view on cool and the way even his friends looked at him weird and changed him. Fitting in is definitely one of the main things "cool" is. GOOD JOB!

Part 2 -

Patterns i noticed in these stories were how each one showed their perception of what cool is to them, or to society. Also showed older person cool versus the teenager cool. Most of the elements of cool were on trend like what he was wearing and the way they walked or talked was cool. Also how the character reacted or those around him/her reacted in like a wow or who is he? way.Another element saw a lot was the new kid or character struggling and his decision is seen as "cool" like standing up for someone or more personal struggle like in Matt's. So characters played the role of the "newbie" or "rebel" in the stories i read.